when....
When feelings are hurtwhen things make u believe in the alternate.
when the evil rules
when u cant fight any longer
when u feel like 'nothing'
when everything feels useless
when momentary feelings are strong enough to kill u anytime
when u break the promise u once made to urself
when u have to choose and u cant decide
when the world seems round and,
u could feel the reaction of ur previous actions, standing on the other side.
when words stop flowing.....
and still u believe that Everything happens for a Reason!!!!
The wall is broken and water gushes out....
life is a race, run fast and u will meet the end soon. happy winning!
posted by richa @ 9:41 PM
10 Comments:
nice 1...xpect a reply really soon dear...
thrs one thin though....
true life is a race....but the faster u run...the closer u come to life...faster u go...more the prob u nevr get to da end...
Believe me with this kind of attitude u will hurt urself every now and then.
Y r u doing this...chill out.
remember "life is too short to be pissed of all the time".
hey u promised u will be ok so atleast keep this promise. plz try to be a bit optimistic from now on.
Life aint bein actin stupid..hurtin urself all da tym...chill out gurl...life is to be lived on ur own terms....dnt lose hope...n think wat happens is fer da best...it alwaz is a happy endin u knw tat....
jus smile dear!!!
very very bad ... tagged and still nothing ... we were expecting somthing you know ... :D btw awesome poems ...
hey!!
tht should be my part!!
me too had these kinda things..!!
aneways...nice one..
n ya u really need to forget these things...!!
since when does www.orkut.com == www.richagulati.blogspot.com???
nice!
the last 2 words could have been 'happy running' or 'happy living' rather than 'happy winning'.
but that cud change the whole approach to the poem......
depends on what you are looking at.....'the end' or 'the journey'....
ur take on that????
There is a bit of sarcasm in the last line symbolizing that since the end is the one and same for all then why do people have to run for that.
though, for me its the journey thats more important than the end.
oey richa...
the previous template was btter...
nothin's can be read properly on black background!!!
you 'think' much more than i 'thought' u do.........
beautifully thought.........
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